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General canon point is mid-film, as Tarzan learns from the visiting humans but before he has taken them to meet the gorillas. It might vary depending on what I'm doing.
In particular I'd be happy to recieve comments regarding:
-how how eloquent I make Tarzan's broken English. Is it too difficult to understand, too simple/complex?
-his ignorance and curiosity. Is it annoying to have him ask questions about just about everything?
Thanks!
General canon point is mid-film, as Tarzan learns from the visiting humans but before he has taken them to meet the gorillas. It might vary depending on what I'm doing.
In particular I'd be happy to recieve comments regarding:
-how how eloquent I make Tarzan's broken English. Is it too difficult to understand, too simple/complex?
-his ignorance and curiosity. Is it annoying to have him ask questions about just about everything?
Thanks!
